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Number 55 Here is the poem What I found The way i found you in the open air. You got me caught in your stunning glare. The time i saw a snow white dove. Reminded me of your kindly love. The morning i woke from a deep deep sleep. The dream of you made me weep. Now as i stood in the open doorway. Your approaching face made my heart sway. We glide away from the dusty ground. My love, your what i found. by tim lo
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JessicaHasTheGroove says:
June 2, 2012 at 8:58 pm (UTC 0)
we used your poem in mr. archie’s class to demonstrate a bad poem holla to period 1 english!!!!!
Calamiti14 says:
June 2, 2012 at 9:12 pm (UTC 0)
You have to have ten syllables in each line.
sorrel3 says:
June 2, 2012 at 10:06 pm (UTC 0)
Ummmm … on the last line, that should be “you’re” not “your”
minecraft6712 says:
June 2, 2012 at 10:44 pm (UTC 0)
haha ive been looking for a that song in the backround for everr. nice poem dude!
AmaSilentwolf says:
June 2, 2012 at 11:18 pm (UTC 0)
It was a lovely poem, thank you for sharing. ^^
JamnJelly1000 says:
June 2, 2012 at 11:28 pm (UTC 0)
its not chessy
DCLOLProductions says:
June 2, 2012 at 11:57 pm (UTC 0)
dun dun dun dun dun..dun dun XD lol nice touch
taffyboyish says:
June 3, 2012 at 12:15 am (UTC 0)
lol. pa-cute
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4xxShadowxx says:
June 3, 2012 at 1:27 am (UTC 0)
way to go and anybody that says that it is tacky or cheesy then they’re idiots because they do not know true genius when they see it
VaUgHaNbEnNeTt says:
June 3, 2012 at 2:25 am (UTC 0)
thank u very much
TiloFunbay says:
June 3, 2012 at 2:26 am (UTC 0)
is paper planes by mia
VaUgHaNbEnNeTt says:
June 3, 2012 at 2:41 am (UTC 0)
hello whats the name of the song in the background?
ZiiNikiBoom says:
June 3, 2012 at 3:06 am (UTC 0)
lolz that not cheesy! its awesome! then again im sortta liturature obsessed n hmmmm is nerdy the right word? geeky? idk 1 of them u know what i mean! hmmmm ur bucket list seems alot easier then mine…i literally have a theroy of how 2 make a blackhole 2 prove on mine but itll have 2 be the last thing i do cuz it sorta involves destoying the earth unfortunatly lolz
NativeJazsy007 says:
June 3, 2012 at 3:28 am (UTC 0)
nice poem